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Secure Your Child's College Admission with These Tips for Writing the Perfect Personal Statement

If you have a high school student who is planning to apply to college, then you know that the process can be overwhelming. One of the most important parts of the college application is the personal statement, which is also known as the Common App essay. This essay is critical because it gives admission readers an opportunity to understand who your child is as a person and how they might contribute to the college's community.

The 2023-24 Common Application Essay Prompts were recently announced, and all students applying via the Common Application must write the personal statement. This year, there are seven prompts to choose from, but what really matters is the story your child chooses, how they choose to tell it, and what the admissions committee learns about them from the essay.

At Sapneil Tutoring, we understand the importance of a well-written personal statement, and we can help your child craft an essay that highlights their unique qualities and experiences. Here are some tips on how to approach each of the seven prompts:

  1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like your child, then encourage them to share their story. They should focus on something unique and specific to them, and explain how it contributed to what they value or influenced how they approach life.

  2. The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when your child faced a challenge, setback, or failure. Encourage them to reflect on how it affected them, and what positive lessons they learned from the experience.

  3. Reflect on a time when your child questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted their thinking, and what was the outcome? The admissions committee is looking for critical thinking skills and creativity, so encourage your child to describe their investigation process and what they learned from it.

  4. Reflect on something that someone has done for your child that has made them happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated them? This prompt is a great opportunity for your child to express gratitude and showcase their positive outlook.

At Sapneil Tutoring, our experts can help your child create a compelling personal statement that will capture the attention of admissions committees. Contact us today to learn more about our services and how we can help your child secure their college admission. Don't wait until it's too late – the college application process can be stressful, but we're here to make it easier for you and your child.

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